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Now this is much better than the last, so much more involving and the perspectives are perfect for drawing in the viewer, a great scene and I love the evil spider mech design. But a critique is not a critique without pointing out some areas that need improvement. So first thing that catches me is the motion blur on the tank, the blur on the spider leg makes sense as its obviously coming down hard next to the tank and looks like a Humvee was sent flying by it, the motion blur on the tank however doesn't really make sense its not really moving at all, maybe a slight blur if its been shunted but these things are pretty heavy and an impact next to it probably wont send it in such a frenzy. Also it would have been nice to the the tank in its painted glory perhaps firing at the beast just to really heat up the scene.
Another point is the environment, its very well painted but feels spars, its goes off into the distance which kinda makes the area feel a little sterile as does the lack of debris on the ground and cars, it feels a little too perfect for a disaster like this. The destruction to the surrounding buildings is very nicely done though, really get a feel this thing is tearing up the area.
All in all a great image, a great improvement on your last especially with the scale which is portrayed beautifully here. Well done and I look forward to seeing more.
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templar127 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013
OH FUCK!
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xmdz Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is amazing. I pull it up and it's BOOM IN YOUR FACE immediately.
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RadioactiveSpine Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Student Writer
This is incredible. Usually massive beings like this are slow and plodding but here you can get a sense of this machine's surprising speed. Civilians fleeing in terror just add to the chaos of the mix and I'm in love with this mech's face.... or complete lack of, depending on what floats your boat :D
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Himik87 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012
Жнец из Mass Effect 3 ?! ;)
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Pteraclaww Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sorry, but..

'me', as in ME? As in, Mass Effect? Is that a Reaper?
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Sergey-Lesiuk Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
no))...just me)
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Pteraclaww Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah, olkie dokey. Still epic, though.
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godeyes Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
John Connor was in that tank......................
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danarogon Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010  Student Digital Artist
WOW MAN THIS IS EPIC!!!!!!
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Sergey-Lesiuk Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
THANX!))
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