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Now this is much better than the last, so much more involving and the perspectives are perfect for drawing in the viewer, a great scene and I love the evil spider mech design. But a critique is not a critique without pointing out some areas that need improvement. So first thing that catches me is the motion blur on the tank, the blur on the spider leg makes sense as its obviously coming down hard next to the tank and looks like a Humvee was sent flying by it, the motion blur on the tank however doesn't really make sense its not really moving at all, maybe a slight blur if its been shunted but these things are pretty heavy and an impact next to it probably wont send it in such a frenzy. Also it would have been nice to the the tank in its painted glory perhaps firing at the beast just to really heat up the scene.
Another point is the environment, its very well painted but feels spars, its goes off into the distance which kinda makes the area feel a little sterile as does the lack of debris on the ground and cars, it feels a little too perfect for a disaster like this. The destruction to the surrounding buildings is very nicely done though, really get a feel this thing is tearing up the area.
All in all a great image, a great improvement on your last especially with the scale which is portrayed beautifully here. Well done and I look forward to seeing more.
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:icontemplar127:
templar127 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013
OH FUCK!
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:iconxmdz:
xmdz Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is amazing. I pull it up and it's BOOM IN YOUR FACE immediately.
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:iconradioactivespine:
RadioactiveSpine Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Student Writer
This is incredible. Usually massive beings like this are slow and plodding but here you can get a sense of this machine's surprising speed. Civilians fleeing in terror just add to the chaos of the mix and I'm in love with this mech's face.... or complete lack of, depending on what floats your boat :D
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:iconhimik87:
Himik87 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012
Жнец из Mass Effect 3 ?! ;)
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:iconpteraclaww:
Pteraclaww Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sorry, but..

'me', as in ME? As in, Mass Effect? Is that a Reaper?
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:iconsergey-lesiuk:
Sergey-Lesiuk Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
no))...just me)
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:iconpteraclaww:
Pteraclaww Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah, olkie dokey. Still epic, though.
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godeyes Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
John Connor was in that tank......................
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:icondanarogon:
danarogon Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WOW MAN THIS IS EPIC!!!!!!
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:iconsergey-lesiuk:
Sergey-Lesiuk Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
THANX!))
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:icondanarogon:
danarogon Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You are very welcome =D i wish i could do stuff like this one day =)
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:iconsergey-lesiuk:
Sergey-Lesiuk Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
100%)
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:icondanarogon:
danarogon Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
=)
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:iconladyowl:
LadyOwl Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010   Digital Artist
ыыы.. круть! реально круто! :D
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:iconsergey-lesiuk:
Sergey-Lesiuk Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Пасиба)
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:icondziuban:
dziuban Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2010
this is action!
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:iconvagab0nda:
vagab0nda Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010  Student Digital Artist
как же красиво!
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:iconsergey-lesiuk:
Sergey-Lesiuk Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
пасиб_)
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magicswordz Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010  Student Digital Artist
reminds me of the teaser for crysis a bit
very cool :)
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:iconsergey-lesiuk:
Sergey-Lesiuk Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
)))))yeah)
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:iconzombieempire:
ZombieEmpire Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2010
Thats wicked to say the very least. Nice job
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Curator-san Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I'd disagree with the critiquer. That's a FUCKING BIG LEG. It's coming down fast, hard, and violently. Furthermore, it's going THROUGH the tank, not beside it. The combined inertia from the the leg and the impact should be enough to do some serious Motion Blur.
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SaintNazaire Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
reminds me of hte scarab from halo
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:icondeusz:
DEUSZ Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2010
War of the world
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:iconsergey-lesiuk:
Sergey-Lesiuk Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Yep)
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:iconljfhutch:
LJFHutch Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Awesome, love it, great movement, great angle, and great subject matter :D
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:iconsergey-lesiuk:
Sergey-Lesiuk Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
thanx)
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:iconsid75:
SID75 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Rock it!!!
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:icontriple3spin:
triple3spin Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2010
Really cool layout and design, colors are matching perfectly with the background noise :D
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:iconthe---virus:
The---Virus Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2010
Great work - Especially the 'motion blur' makes it look very dynamic :)
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:iconbeefeebrillate:
beefeebrillate Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2010   Filmographer
omg this is so epic. :faint:
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:iconamericanhalo:
AmericanHalo Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
M1 Abrams to save the day! ... or at least we can only hope. lol great picture keep up the fantastic work instant fav!! ^.^
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jasonz777z Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010
And again, one word: WIN.
It's fantastic!
Tho... the reason you have so little views is because of the name... I never searched 'me2' on deviantart.
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GhosTagE Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Student Artist
that guy down there is gged
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:iconhider6:
Hider6 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010
I want to own this giant mechanical spider.
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:iconsergey-lesiuk:
Sergey-Lesiuk Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
)))
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:iconfalarsimons:
Falarsimons Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010
hhahaha nice man like your stuff a lot
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:iconsanmonku:
sanmonku Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010
great work !
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:iconeduardvasiliev:
EduardVasiliev Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010
...ooochen' nihrenovo
Siroga, ty molodchaga

(snimayu shliapu)
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:iconsergey-lesiuk:
Sergey-Lesiuk Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Дякую)...аж хочется еще круче сделать после таких слов)...батьку!)
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artozi Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
It is very well done. Great sense of action and dynamism. I needed a few seconds to read it to be honest. Maybe there is too much motion blur. You could work one more readable silhoutes so we can actually tell how the robot looks like. Overall it is very energetic and vivid scene, but some minor improvements would make it even better.
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VelsingDesigns Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010
amazing
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:iconxchainlinkx:
xchainlinkx Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
incredible
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:iconfor-as:
For-as Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing !
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Destro2k Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2010  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
wow
i mean just.... wow
reminds me on crysis
the effect to capture the current movement of all items in this picture blows me away

really awesome work =)
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:iconmurf79:
murf79 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2010
amazing concept and design! :)

;)
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:iconnekopanzer:
NekoPanzer Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2010
Hey! That Dodge is parked on the wrong side of the street!

Good job! Looks amazing as always. :D
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:iconsergey-lesiuk:
Sergey-Lesiuk Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Durango)
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ifreex Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Уау нет слов....
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:iconvoidrunner:
voidrunner Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2010
great exploding rubble. interesting mech design. why do giant robots hate cities so much anyway?
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